If your book has been beta-read, workshopped, and critiqued, line editing is the next step in the process! This service focuses on improving paragraph and sentence flow, as well as readability. Are your readers' five senses being ignited? Does the dialogue truly reflect the culture and age group you’re portraying? Are certain sentences phrased awkwardly? Do parts of the writing take the reader out of the story? The purpose of line editing is to improve the overall style of your writing.
Showing vs. telling
Inconsistent dialogue/inner thoughts
Type of Feedback
Your feedback will be in the form of your manuscript with my comments throughout, as well as an editorial letter that details any major patterns or issues noticed.
.013-.018 per word
All prices are estimates and final pricing will be determined upon review of the author's manuscript.
If you book more than one service with me, you get a 10% discount on the total price (only applicable for developmental, line, and copy edits).