Writers Untapped—Editorial Solutions
You deserve an editor who will help you untap your story's greatest potential.

Book Editing Services


"There is no great writing, only great rewriting." 

—Louis D. Brandeis

Line Editing

If your book has been beta-read, workshopped, and critiqued, line editing is the next step in the process! This service focuses on improving paragraph and sentence flow, as well as readability. Are your readers' five senses being ignited? Does the dialogue truly reflect the culture and age group you’re portraying? Are certain sentences phrased awkwardly? Do parts of the writing take the reader out of the story? The purpose of line editing is to improve the overall style of your writing.


What is line editing?


  • Showing vs. telling 

  • Awkward phrasing

  • Passive voice

  • Weak verbs

  • Inconsistent dialogue/inner thoughts

  • Sentence variation

  • Word choice

  • Sentence flow

How much does line editing cost?

Type of Feedback

Your feedback will be in the form of your manuscript with my comments throughout, as well as an editorial letter that details any major patterns or issues noticed.

What kind of feedback do I get with line editing?


.014-.02 per word

All prices are estimates and final pricing will be determined upon review of the author's manuscript.